Post by flora60468 on Feb 25, 2024 1:52:22 GMT -5
Things I’d change or test Video! When offering a video solution, you should really be using a video to demonstrate what your product is about. Tsk, tsk. Button copy: Make it very explicit. What exactly are you downloading? The only way to know is to read the small text at the top of the form area. Repeat this clearly on the button Site*: TubeMogul Weekend – Newsletter Signup Critiqued by: Carlos What I like Clean: This is very easy to read. The white background with orange headers and black body text stands out easily and the action is easy to see.
Emphasis: Startup Weekend clearly got the memo that Chinese Malaysia Phone Number List bold is a good way to draw attention to important information. Proof: Existing companies that started at a Startup Weekend. Things I’d change or test Leverage Lists: Too much of a good thing is a bad thing; the first paragraph has too much bold. That first paragraph is probably better off as a list. If you step back from the content you can see that the bold is overpowering. Site*: StartupWeekend.org 17. Video Storytelling – eBook Download Critiqued by: Carlos What I like Straight to The Point: The title is informative and leads directly to the action. What’s the Value.
If you are giving something for free people don’t necessarily think about how much it would cost them to buy the thing you are giving. Function: About the eBook has a concise description of what the book contains, now the visitor knows what they are going to get. Things I’d change or test Order: I would definitely test having Written by appear directly below the action. That makes the eBook more important than the authors, but still offers up the authors as a trust factor at the action point. Benefits: How does this benefit the visitor.
Emphasis: Startup Weekend clearly got the memo that Chinese Malaysia Phone Number List bold is a good way to draw attention to important information. Proof: Existing companies that started at a Startup Weekend. Things I’d change or test Leverage Lists: Too much of a good thing is a bad thing; the first paragraph has too much bold. That first paragraph is probably better off as a list. If you step back from the content you can see that the bold is overpowering. Site*: StartupWeekend.org 17. Video Storytelling – eBook Download Critiqued by: Carlos What I like Straight to The Point: The title is informative and leads directly to the action. What’s the Value.
If you are giving something for free people don’t necessarily think about how much it would cost them to buy the thing you are giving. Function: About the eBook has a concise description of what the book contains, now the visitor knows what they are going to get. Things I’d change or test Order: I would definitely test having Written by appear directly below the action. That makes the eBook more important than the authors, but still offers up the authors as a trust factor at the action point. Benefits: How does this benefit the visitor.